Score: 10

"oh F****"

submission: FUCK! a Comic Collection

date: June 8, 2009

I expected something like this, but not going in the comic direction, anyways

Positive:

for something that was that quickly made its pretty good but don't go that way, work hard on the art for the people to enjoy, I know, Gimp, but still you could make them smoother

the alternation of the music, kills monotony a little

you had some comedy in there but some like the dog that as a pistol with him and don't let the guy hug, or maybe when the guy is reading the Fuck volume, it had potential but its to quick to be funny, try making the comic strip of three squares and not just two

the comic mood you gave the parts where you change the volumes and to the originals

conclusion:

the only problem I could really see, is that since the comics are so short you should have posted more and not make this so little and since this happens( the sketching) during class, you might as well make more jokes about the hate towards education, well at least some :P

I'll give you a ten because you have potential in your idea, so don't let go to waste and entertain the world with guys who can't seem to stop saying fuck ^^

Score: 10

"what a show ^^"

submission: Hay Wars

date: March 23, 2009

added comedy there with all the mindless shooting, its one of the best way to parody star wars, but you could have used like a laser sword parody and mock the most used phrases in the series and try put a person trying to interrupt your shooting, then you shoot at the person, you guys made the film climax when the camera man said you were bad actors ^^

Score: 10

"ok...........!?"

submission: Beneath the Sheets

date: March 23, 2009

going for a "terror" movie review

that was an interesting plot you wrote there, the camera gave me a REC feeling
but then the ghost acting, he tripped XD
just in my opinion, I think the ghost or terror character, should just be at plain sight, no sheets, make yourself look terrifying(there are enough terror movies to get ideas from) an then distort the film, like its done in some horror films when the scary character enters or when it appears

about the place of event....try an "wrecked place", those usually help setting the terror mood

about the light work--- a less lighted place would help look scarier and with that you could play with the ghost shadows, when "he" appears he could be entering from the place where the light comes, then kick notices the shadow, he tries slowly getting out of the house with out making noise but then the ghost notices and the shadow "moves"(goes after the guy)

the ending.....thats up to you :P

Score: 10

"nice to see"

submission: Natasha Lovell

date: March 23, 2009

you have someone that special in your life, now grip to that person hard ;)
also I though of some tips, if you were thinking of making another this year

first that stickman thing by the bottom is nice and entertaining, but now try just making normal drawing representations of you and your gf by the left side (people take more notice of things there so it seems ;p)

put a slow animation on you both, like wind blowing through your hair and you two holding together, that way it will give a nice romantic feeling and that the time when you two are together seems an eternity....but an happy eternity ;)

and how about you talk on how your relation started and continue?
like a story( so try making a photo clip session but with various photos following one and another, or something :P, to give an animation feeling)

also with that story try putting more songs you like( the amount should be the same amounts of the parts you wish to divide the story in) also put the song in a progressive way, start with a favorite song you may have, then culminate in the last part with the song you both love ;)

Score: 10

"the last by your request"

submission: Subordinate Droids 3

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 9/10
Story: 9/10
Audio:9/10
Dynamic:10/10

Animation:

Story: evil lunatic has a son, he vows revenge...you sure can come up with some nice stuff, generic? who cares ^^

Audio: was great, although quality could have been better

Dynamic: almost everything you need in a regular pro flash^^

ohh I forgot to talk about the animation in the last flash, sorry about that, anyhow if you need more reviews just ask ^^

Score: 10

"getting better"

submission: Subordinate Droids 2

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 9/10
Story: 8/10
Audio:9/10
Dynamic:10/10

Animation:

Story: ha...the evil lunatic returns...that reminds me of so many classic cartoons from the past, the lunatic get is but electrocuted, now this is entertaining ^^

Audio: was already good in the past ;)

Dynamic: all you need, and with a nice loading screen ^^

Score: 10

"Getting pro eh? ^^"

submission: Subordinate Droids

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 9/10
Story: 8/10
Audio:9/10
Dynamic:9/10

Animation: it may not been 3-d but it look way more professional than all the previous ones

Story: bunch of killer robots, government lunatic,lazy kid...its all a good story needs

Audio: combining background music, and now voice acting, this is getting professional

Dynamic: all from before and now credits, this is getting big :)

Score: 10

"only one ten? I better ten this also XD"

submission: SpaceRobotLasers

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 9/10
Story: 7/10
Audio:8/10
Dynamic:8/10

Animation: the graphics seem a little weird, but the work that was behind them was big so extra points on that one

Story: a girl being underestimated, then it manages to overcome the other...that's is kinda generic when it come to modern age girl story

Audio: nice tune and it showed more combination than most of your other flashes

Dynamic: nothing really new that I can comment here....

Score: 10

"bomb disposal... to the EXTREME!!! XD"

submission: Going Postal: Extreme

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 8/10
Story: 8/10
Audio:7/10
Dynamic:8/10

Animation: just you smooth animated style^^

Story: a postman that saves the day, in a strange way, original but not as original as the pigeon flash

Audio: the audio is good but didn't show that much of compatibility

Dynamic: Still the same, just a new play button....

Score: 10

"Psycho bird XD"

submission: Pigeon Psychosis

date: February 9, 2009

Animation: 8/10
Story: 9/10
Audio:8/10
Dynamic:7/10

Animation: the movements itself are smoother(the guy in particular), I'm thinking more frames were used in this...

Story: this leave from the usual type of story line you make, now we got psychotic storyline, psycho pigeon that something you don't see every day ^^

Audio: the audio and the sound efects were good, but something seems too lack

Dynamic: nothing new to say here, you know what I said before.....