Age/Gender: 17, Male
in despise of everything, you try not to get affected...
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Latest Flash Reviews
I expected something like this, but not going in the comic direction, anyways
Positive:
for something that was that quickly made its pretty good but don't go that way, work hard on the art for the people to enjoy, I know, Gimp, but still you could make them smoother
the alternation of the music, kills monotony a little
you had some comedy in there but some like the dog that as a pistol with him and don't let the guy hug, or maybe when the guy is reading the Fuck volume, it had potential but its to quick to be funny, try making the comic strip of three squares and not just two
the comic mood you gave the parts where you change the volumes and to the originals
conclusion:
the only problem I could really see, is that since the comics are so short you should have posted more and not make this so little and since this happens( the sketching) during class, you might as well make more jokes about the hate towards education, well at least some :P
I'll give you a ten because you have potential in your idea, so don't let go to waste and entertain the world with guys who can't seem to stop saying fuck ^^
Author's Response:
Thank you DarkRider! This was my first web-comic and it also was something of an experiment if I could upload a comic in flash form. My next Comics are definitly going to be longer, I promise. I'm very glad you liked it and thanks alot for the review!
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added comedy there with all the mindless shooting, its one of the best way to parody star wars, but you could have used like a laser sword parody and mock the most used phrases in the series and try put a person trying to interrupt your shooting, then you shoot at the person, you guys made the film climax when the camera man said you were bad actors ^^
Author's Response:
Sword fight is in the future. I'm guessing.
I HOPE.
Thanks for the review.
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going for a "terror" movie review
that was an interesting plot you wrote there, the camera gave me a REC feeling
but then the ghost acting, he tripped XD
just in my opinion, I think the ghost or terror character, should just be at plain sight, no sheets, make yourself look terrifying(there are enough terror movies to get ideas from) an then distort the film, like its done in some horror films when the scary character enters or when it appears
about the place of event....try an "wrecked place", those usually help setting the terror mood
about the light work--- a less lighted place would help look scarier and with that you could play with the ghost shadows, when "he" appears he could be entering from the place where the light comes, then kick notices the shadow, he tries slowly getting out of the house with out making noise but then the ghost notices and the shadow "moves"(goes after the guy)
the ending.....thats up to you :P
Author's Response:
Some great ideas for the future. I like the idea of using a more wrecked place. All we had to work with at the moment was my house, but I have a few images that I can think of now.
Thanks for the review.
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Latest Audio Reviews
this was the least type of music I would you see do, but it turn out rather awesome congrats on this achievement
the progression was nicely done
there is a good show of variation that keeps the listener on the sound :3
vox, was awesomely put here, it usually don't flow that easily, but you made it sound like it was already there in the song before you even started to create it
the ending wasn't in that fade out style so no idiot can argue about that part
even though it was a music out of your normal style, I do see that ambient side on the beat, it just made this not look like those monotonous house tracks
this was and is!!! one of your best work to date, if not the best
Author's Response:
Thanks man,i'm glad you like it :D
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"well it gets better I guess......."
the guitar right of start with its speed and sound really don't give a nice deep ambient touch
later by 1:03, you managed to do that, although the percussion had a dnb rhythm to it, the bass and beat at that part was good
you have those arabic hums, which I think go well with the song, but the guitar............ it gives a rather different feeling than the rest of the sounds and rhythms
Author's Response:
hmmm i dunno,i thought the guitars went well with the rest.
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first of all the first piano chord, reminded me of some other song, for no apparent reason...yeah right, but the way it progressed was rather good
kinda mellow but I know why, the piano was kinda delightful, although the percussion leaves something to be desired
and yeah the guitar effect reminded me of U2, but I don't really like their style...well its my taste :P
Author's Response:
but i love U2!! not that this sounds like them but still...
thanks for the review!!
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